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Tim Freund's avatar

“ he is all pine and I am apple orchard” love that line

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Tim Freund's avatar

For me the AI assisted poem lacked depth. I could feel Frost’s dilemma, his mental back and forth on building a wall… his weighing the pros and cons…did not get that any sense of emotions in the other.

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David W. Zoll's avatar

Thanks for the comments Tim. Agree there is so much depth and so many layers with Frost.

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Jane Baker's avatar

No. I don't like that poem. Even if it wasn't AI assisted I would still have reservations about it.

Yes,the picture is amazing. In UK I saw the moment live when the two side drilling the Channel Tunnel met,one side England,other side France,and the driller drivers shook hands. I'm familiar with the Robert Frost poem and id love to read more of his poems,and I could do,I just haven't. I'll do that. But again I have reservations about his dissing of his neighbours sentiment. It is a lovely poem,as is the one about snow,and the two paths,but here is not the place to put my objections so I'll do my own Substack post on the subject.

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David W. Zoll's avatar

Thanks for sharing your thoughts Jane! I struggled a bit with it too. Still trying to understand this AI thing.

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